Off the coast of rhode island , this catch , a female lobster that ' s part brown , part orange 在罗德艾兰州海岸，捕获了一只一半棕色一半橙色的雌龙虾(这句话加上主语是否会更通顺些呢) 。
Mark ' s tutor had difficulty in reducing his draft chapter to coherent shape . the orginal had rambled on for fifteen pages 马克的导师难以将他的草稿改缩成一篇通顺连贯的文章，底稿漫漫地写了15页之多。
I have taken the framework of their words and polished them a little for the sake of grammar and fluidity of meaning and readability 我已经对他们的话作出了结构上的调整，并稍加润饰使其语法更通顺，更具可读性。
Give five words to every group , let them make a composition together in three minutes , then one of them read it out 老师给每组同学五个单词，让他们在三分钟内编成短文，其中一人读出来，语句通顺，无重大语法错误者得分。
Maryland college student has been found alive after being trapped in a ravine for a week following a car accident 3马里兰大学的学生朱丽安在车祸中被困在峡谷里为时一周，近日被找到还是生还（被发现生还，还是放在这里不通顺） 。
When the reply came a few months later they were enrolled as full members , but chu ' s membership was kept a secret from outsiders 是“对外界保持秘密”的意思，但若采取直译，全句读起来不很通顺，故为了行文方便，采用反译法，即从相反的角度来译。
Actually i think i really have to improve my oral and written skills . they are really really bad . hope that the english town can help me 在这个程度，你的生字库已很丰富，对实用英语也有很好的掌握。你也能阅读大部份的文章和写通顺兼很少语病的文章
Never thought of becoming a poet , for neither i can spell nor write well ; but i have things to tell and i wish you could hear them all 没有想过可以做一个诗人，因为连简单的字都经常写错，造句总也不怎么通顺，但又的确有一些话想讲，更希望你能够听得见。
Only reinforcing study unceasingly , expanding knowledge , accumulating every aspect ' s data , ability makes the translation of selling contract to be the best stage of both honest and smooth 只有不断加强学期，扩大知识面，积累各方面的资料，才能使销售合同的翻译渐如既忠实又通顺之佳境。
A federal appeals court ruled that the bush administration cannot legally use new anti - terrorism laws to keep u . s . residents locked up indefinitely without charging them 联邦上诉院规定布什行政部在法律上不能使用新的反恐法律以使美国居民束缚美国居民不再指控布什行政部（不通顺，建议分析理解再翻译） 。
